Using my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.)
To view it best, bring up the two versions in different windows and view them side by side to see what was changed.
Then give me your thoughts in the comment section.
JUGGLING ACT
Most of this lesson needs to come after you read the chapter, so read.
See you at the bottom!
Chapter 35 “FINAL”
“Mr. Tyree.” Mallory extended her hand to our guest, but her rigid body indicated welcome wasn’t really on her mind. “Nice to finally meet you.”
“It’s nice to meet you, too, ma’am.” Tyree nodded, shaking her hand and stepping into the house. “And—”
“It’s just ‘Tyree,’ honey.” I said…
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