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The Juggling Act That Is GREAT Storytelling

Dan Alatorre AUTHOR's avatarDAN ALATORRE

coverUsing my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.)

To view it best, bring up the two versions in different windows and view them side by side to see what was changed.

Then give me your thoughts in the comment section.

JUGGLING ACT

Most of this lesson needs to come after you read the chapter, so read.

See you at the bottom!


Chapter 35 “FINAL”

 

“Mr. Tyree.” Mallory extended her hand to our guest, but her rigid body indicated welcome wasn’t really on her mind. “Nice to finally meet you.”

“It’s nice to meet you, too, ma’am.” Tyree nodded, shaking her hand and stepping into the house. “And—”

“It’s just ‘Tyree,’ honey.” I said…

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About The Owl Lady

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Viv Drewa is a Michigan native who has enjoyed reading and writing since 1963. Though she studied medicinal chemistry at the University of Michigan, her passion has always been writing. She had been awarded third place for her nonfiction short story about her grandfather's escape from Poland. Later, she rewrote this story and was published in the "Polish American Journal" as "From the Pages of Grandfather's Life" and has republished it on Amazon.com as a short story. Viv took creative and journalism courses to help in her transition to fulfill her dream of becoming a writer. She worked as an intern for Port Huron's 'The Times Herald", and also wrote, edited and did the layout or the Blue Water Multiple Sclerosis newsletter "Thumb Prints." She also has a business promoting authors. Owl and Pussycat Book Promotions. Viv, her husband Bob and their cat Princess, live in Port Huron, Michigan.

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