Thunderous my feelings
blue eyes gaze into my soul
weak kneed tremble
thunder sends me reeling
the clouds clap with emotion
caught off guard I tumble
thunderous my feelings
blue eyes gaze into my soul
Triolet:
An eight- line stanza having just two rhymes and repeating the first line as the fourth and seventh lines, and the second line as the eighth.
The Triolet is a fun form to play with as it is short and sweet. I tend to take the primary line (1, 4and 7) and alter the words but not the sentiment. Have a go…
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“The world is but a canvas to our imagination”
~Henry David Thoreau
Where does your imagination take you?????
