
One of my friends advised me to have a second look at the finished draft of ‘BREED The Secret Design To Maintain Racial Inequality Among The Despised Classes’. Though the book attracted my friends interest he said he was put off by the long paragraphs and some editing glitches. I accepted the advice and took a second look at my manuscript. After examining it with a critical eye I decided that my friend was right. Though I’m still sucked in by the storyline I admit the presentation could use some improvement so I decided to do a complete revision. I’ll announce in the news section of my blog when the revised edition is complete so you can update your copy. In the meantime enjoy the story and keep the constructive criticism coming.
If you’ve ever rewritten your own work you will understand my surprise at the irregularities I discovered had…
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