I’m three chapters and over three thousand words into writing my WIP. I reached a point yesterday where I stared at a passage and just didn’t know how I was going to write it in third person singular and get the true nuances of what my main character was feeling or what he was thinking without going into some long narrative about the past.
This would have taken my reader out of the action and bogged down the story. I also don’t want my reader to get too far into the head of Guillermo March, because let’s face it, he’s kind of a cynical jerk.
Guillermo is one of 46 hold-out humans living on the planet C’Tuul somewhere far from their abandoned solar system. He is a member of what is left of the human race, and because of their desperate situation, is terribly cynical and in many ways has…
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