I’d like to take a poll but better yet, I’d like to see your comments on the first page of my work in progress; Demons and Jade.
All I want to know (I suppose) is, if you read this first page, would you want to keep going. (?)
I realize this is a dangerous experiment because not everyone is into the whole pirate historical fiction thing but hey, that’s what we writers do, right? We risk it all to tell the stories we want to tell and put ourselves out there, regardless of what may come back. 🙂
If you’ve read The Blue Diamond, then this opening scene will seem very familiar. However, I’ve rewritten the scene to open this book with but in Ivory’s perspective. This scene is crucial to her story as this was the day the Ivory Razor was truly born.
First page only…(Of course as we…
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