
I’m writing a book series called Tips For Better Fiction Writing, in which I tackle all the rookie mistakes new writers make.
And hey, I made them, too.
Which is why I’m helping you not make them.
Until the next book in the series comes out, you’ll see these gems here on the blog.
Here’s a passage from a recent MS (manuscript) I was editing. The character names are changed to not give away the story, but it’ll change anyway.
This is not a fantasy story, where mermaids and dragons might exist. It’s modern day/contemporary. You’ll see why I note that in a second.

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Built like a tall lumpy sofa, Joshua could not be described as fat or muscular. He was wiping his nose…
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