Morgan’s Query Corner:
Answering Your Query Quandaries
NOTE: If you submit your query to me (firstname.lastname@example.org), and you are selected for inclusion, I will give you a high-level review, in-line feedback, and my own draft of your query. If this is your query, feel free to use or ignore as much of the advice and suggestions as you wish.
[Disclaimer: Any query selected for the page will be posted on this website for perpetuity. I am an amateur with no actual accepted queries and a good number of form rejections. This does not guarantee an agent or even an amazing query, just a new take by someone who’s read The Query Shark archives twice and enjoys playing with queries.]
You’ve got a cute middle-grade adventure! You’re following query format beautifully. I think this just needs a bit of polish to avoid cliche phrasing and really make…